Some people believe that the presence and involvement of a man in homes have a huge role to play in sustaining the family.
To what extent do you agree/disagree
There is a currently contentious argument over whether activities of the father have an enormous role to play in maintaining the family. I totally agree with the opinion because father is not he breadwinner and the head of the family.
The main reason I believe activities of the father in houses have an enormous role to play in maintaining the family is because father the breadwinner of the family. He made provisions for the family needs such as funds, clothes, food shelter and make sure that family is comfortable. For instance, in the Arab nation, women are not allowed to work, they are to stay indoor to do house chores and look after the kids while their husband will be out to earn the daily living as a result of this most of men in Arab nation engaged in multiple jobs as show by recent report from a jobs journal in Doha. For the family to be maintain man need a great job by providing necessary materials for the family upkeep.
Another reason I support the notion that activities of the father in houses have an enormous role to play in maintaining the family is due to number he fact that father is the head of the family, he formulate the policies and principles that guide the conduct of the family. These policies and principles teaches the children their own roles in the house and how to behave in the society. For instance, research as shown that eighty percent of juvenile delinquencies are children of single mothers because if father has got involve in the nurturing of this children, there will be decrease at rate they(children) commit social vices. The presence of a man in the house can not be under rated.
In conclusion, I completely agree that activities of the father in houses have enormous role to play in maintaining the family because he provide necessary materials needed and he is the leader of the family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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There is a currently contentious argument over whet...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ion because father is not he breadwinner and the head of the family. The main re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...maintaining the family is because father the breadwinner of the family. He made p...
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Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the men') or simply say ''most men''.
Suggestion: most of the men; most men
...rn the daily living as a result of this most of men in Arab nation engaged in multiple jobs...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
...le jobs as show by recent report from a jobs journal in Doha. For the family to be m...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'formulates'.
Suggestion: formulates
...at father is the head of the family, he formulate the policies and principles that guide ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...her has got involve in the nurturing of this children, there will be decrease at rat...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: underrated
...esence of a man in the house can not be under rated. In conclusion, I completely agree tha...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...ay in maintaining the family because he provide necessary materials needed and he is th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65749235474 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57722517659 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45871559633 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0117600798 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7272727273 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152958735028 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726396408443 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052230782025 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117394406737 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274606430769 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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