Today, the high sale of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays , advertisement is playing important role in the sales of popular consumer products in our society but, some believe that the advertisement has influence the needs of the society therefore, making the society to buy what they don’t need .in m opinion I completely agree with the statement that advertisement has influence the sales of consumer products .this essay will discuss three important of advertisement.
To start with, creation of awareness about a certain product influence its sales. The society has to get aware of the consumer products through advertisement either on television or radio. This advert may be rely several times with interesting caption that will catch the mind of the viewers. For instance, morten insecticide has gain its popularity through advertisement. The product society was not aware of this product when it newly came out but after the company has ran several advert on media it gain popularity and there are more demand for this product.
Furthermore, comparism of the product with other one is vital. Reason why the advertised products are better than other one are started in the advert, this play a psychological effect on the mind of the consumer, the idea let me try this product shows the mind of the consumer has been captured through advertisement. Many fall to this category tends increase demand for consumer products . I have witnessed a scenario where a friend convience her friend on need to choose a particular over the other one. Nobody want to waste his/her money on inferior product, they will rather choose a good one over a bad products.
Lastly, availability of this consumer products are made know. People appreciate a product that is readily available in the store. From the advert various stores where this items can be purchase is stated I the advertisement. To exemplify, research shows that 80% of high demand products are readily available in the various sales outlets.
In conclusion, I opine that high sale of consumer products are due to the awareness, reason why the product is better than other and availability of the product which are made to known to the society through advertisement .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12078651685 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85356977629 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.6569538262 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.9375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540522257643 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676255770814 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115313548835 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827986441121 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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