Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people claim that the most effective way to reduce crime rates is to extend prison sentences. There is also a great number of individuals that opines the opposite and believes that more effective ways can be used in order to solve this problem. Personally, I believe that increasing the time in prison sentences is not the best solution to that problem. The reasons why and both views will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, giving longer prison sentences may indeed decrease the rates of crimes since criminals that have committed severe crimes will not have the capacity to repeat them in prison. For instance, a child's rapist will not be able to rape a child again. Moreover, people with these kind of crimes deserve to spend the majority of their lives in prison in order to be punished for what they have committed.
However, there will always be criminals committing the same crime regardless the time they might spend in prison since it is psychological proven that the majority of them does not have the mental health to realize the severity of his or her actions.What is more, it is a fact that there are numerous cases where people that are later proven to be innocent were obliged to spend a long time of their lives imprisoned due to lack of evidence even though they were not guilty. Thus, it would be highly unfair for them to face a longer sentence than they would face initially.
In conclusion, giving longer prison sentences is mainly a form of longer punishment rather than an effective measure to decrease the rates of crime because as it is aforementioned criminals who are not mentally healthy will not be stopped by the extension of sentence.. Personally, I believe that people should look deeper in the problem and find more effective solution that extending the prison sentences.
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Suggestion: What
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82911392405 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55263451318 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.726422069 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.727272727 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279671075563 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113900751164 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720465282962 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18045859153 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896365439274 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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