Over decades ago, there are arguments on whether government and companies should build sports and social facilities or not,for the local dwellers.In my own opinion,I strongly believe that such a development will promote the life of people.
Based on my own way of understanding,establishement of sports as well as local facilities by government,like football field,table tennis and basketball will promote a good healthy buid up,for the youths and people in general.For instance,in my locality,during evening period,village dwellers go to the field to play football while some people go to the river to swim.Furthermore,such an activities can enhance proper blood circulation in individuals as well as reduction in amount fatty deposite in our body. Additionally,it is evidenced that exercise reduces the degree of thinking in people,which indirectly decreases depression in human beings.
Secondly,it is expected of government of a particular country or region to build social facilities for the local communities to ensure proper leaving.For example,cinema,parks,entertainment centers.These facilities promote unity and foster good and effective relationship among the local dwellers.More over,closeby community can get to know each other through participation in these facilities.Finally,a particular region is respected based on the availability of the core social and basic amenities that are found there.So it will be of a grate opportunity for the local inhabitant to have immediate and quick access of these life promoting basic amenities and facilities.
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I like the grading.It serves me well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95132743363 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.29810035862 2.80592935109 153% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615044247788 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.318746228 49.4020404114 430% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 336.25 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.5 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 7.06120827912 389% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12895511921 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758861421177 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059382867039 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986169190571 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469494405809 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.74 50.2224549098 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.12 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.72 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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