Some people believe that graduates of middle school have to continue studing at higher education school But another types of people s think on the contrary

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...inue studing at higher education school.But another types of peoples think on the c...
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... think on the contrary. On the one hand,pupils do not have a clear undestaining correc...
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...undestaining correct meaning of the job.In a small schooling they are not in a str...
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... position to undertake early employment.Anoyher negative side is loosing young peoples ...
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... is loosing young peoples precious time.For example,if they would work before enter...
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... young peoples precious time.For example,if they would work before entering univers...
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...ey would work before entering university,they can forget about education.And it would...
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...versity,they can forget about education.And it would hard to undestand or remember ...
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...ould hard to undestand or remember words,senteces and skills which they got.The side effe...
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...ords,senteces and skills which they got.The side effect of disconnecting from schoo...
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...e significant in the first several years,but with age,it will surely disadvantage th...
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... in the first several years,but with age,it will surely disadvantage them a lot.Bef...
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...,it will surely disadvantage them a lot.Before long,dissapointed from early employment...
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...rely disadvantage them a lot.Before long,dissapointed from early employment,young people migh...
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... long,dissapointed from early employment,young people might resolve,young people might...
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...ly employment,young people might resolve,young people might resolve to resume study.Bu...
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...ng people might resolve to resume study.But after that,it can suitable for learnong...
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...t resolve to resume study.But after that,it can suitable for learnong any more. On...
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...or learnong any more. On the other hand,starting work career before entering to higher e...
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... school would be able to broad thinking.It can teach to person suppose to mind thi...
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...pose to mind think more and more modern.And believe living alike adults.As a result...
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... modern.And believe living alike adults.As a result of being unemployed,younge peo...
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...e adults.As a result of being unemployed,younge people can plan how to earn cash for fu...
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...le can plan how to earn cash for future.For instance,it can help to school boys or ...
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...how to earn cash for future.For instance,it can help to school boys or girls have n...
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...e not difficulties in forth on the cash.But anyway,continuing study is better choic...
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...iculties in forth on the cash.But anyway,continuing study is better choice than work in a s...
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...n work in a school years. In conclusion,opinion of the first type people is oveecome wi...
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...advantages of working in a school years.And there we can not see much advantages of...
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...a school years.And there we can not see much advantages of working before entering t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58723404255 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46181655122 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.454243805 49.4020404114 464% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.25 106.682146367 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.75 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.25 7.06120827912 414% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365524369082 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.329748848945 0.084324248473 391% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.317958803831 0.0667982634062 476% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329748848945 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.317958803831 0.056905535591 559% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 13.0946893788 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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