Some people believe that for a hobby to be enjoyable. It should be hard to acquire or learn do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this dark era,it do not matter that hobbies are difficult to acquire or easy to learn. Unfortunately, it is far more important that hobbies of a person are more enjoyable because of this people cannot get monotonous from their own hobbies and the chance of their get professional player increases. I agree with this scenario.
To commence with,there are numerous of people who create their carrier buy Pressuring their favourite game such as MS Dhon, Virat Kohli and many more. So it is not indeed to regret hobbies of an life because it has power to create fulfill person from inner body by Money, socially and mentally. However, people are well aware of that favourite games are help in many places either in development of body or advancement of "brain power" but according to new trend education is the most dominant evil due to which people shift towards these scenario and hobbies are not get more enjoyable. Since, they are unaware of fact that benefits of physical activity are more imperative than education level. Neverthless, If a person has speciality in their field, then he or she show with their country at global phase and grab plethora of respect for others.Therefore, hobbies are more powerful in comparison to different things.
I would like to add some more points to support how it is gives more benefit to an individual. firstly,favourite game should be hard to acquire unfortunately It will help in increasing their interest in this field which further result in making professional person in their hobbies. in dark circle, if a person try to copy the hobbies of other person then it becomes difficult for them to stay on track because it is not very easy for them. Therefore, hobbies can change the life of person in one conditionIf one has pashionized about their games.
To conclude, this essay has elucidated all the points However,hobbies are activities which generate from nature.So, people must aware of their hobbies and prefer to play them in their free time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96449704142 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82528733419 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2849061094 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.076923077 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214994553079 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844215443887 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655339095922 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140742933445 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638721130441 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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