"Violence is man re-creating himself". One of most controversial issue today relates to whether an increase violence in society because police officer carry guns ? In this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic examples and assertions ,and shape up my opinion by the end.
To commerce with,I tend to think that there are certain reasons behind the statement which can be taken into consideration.The first and foremost idea that comes to my mind is that police officer can miss use the weapon intentively for instance fake encounter , it is not good . That style of carrying pistol has been copied by most of the youngster because of these security people ultrimately ,it leads to violence in casees and the police is not here to create disorder, they are here to persive disorder.
On the other side of a coin,its darker side can also be not neglected. Firstly, In the order have
fear in the mind of people copy should be mane . The people donot have fear as they commit crime .Moreover,In the order to defence the attack of various outsocial elelimats,weaponare must for every police man. To given a specific paradigm , a survey conducted in the leading newspaper reveals that guns are important to guarantee that police forces as well as society are safe from the threat of criminal .
Nevertheless, weighting both the opinion, I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground one effective clap required the use of hands.So, no dough the the police men should be given weapon in order to maintain peace in society but still, it should only be allocated after a proper training as in oder to reduce its misuse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90035587189 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83262618058 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.321178502 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.7 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130767497415 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047145126254 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320992894569 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630722011245 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351541548349 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.