People’s opinions differ as whether or not raising tax on the industrial sector will solve the environmental pollution. While such measure can reduce contamination by discourage industries from polluting activities, I believe that raising people conceiveness about the enviornmental protection and imposing heavy penalties for environment violations would be more feasible solutions to address the root causes of these issues.
On the one hand, increasing taxes on numerous industries can help decrease the pollution level to some extent. In reality, several industries selling low-priced to customers are more likely to ignore waste treatment processes and use hardzard chemicals in the production. Therefore, raising heavy taxes on these plants would serve as a deterrent against them from polluting activies as they would need to increase their product prices or using environmental friendly alternatives. For example, some EU countries, such as Germany and Netherland, have successfully reduced the contamination by implementing a carbon tax on their industries and installing cleaner technologies and practices in the production.
Despite the mentioned above, environmental pollution can stem from various factors, mainly from poor public perceiveness about the environmental protection and loosed laws for polluting violation, not solely from polluting activities of industries. Therefore, there are two primary measures that can be taken to mitigate these issues. Chief of these is that the government should run campaigns to raise awareness of citizens about the detrimental impacts of environmental pollution and importance of the protection of the Earth. These workshops should be carried out in in schools as complusory subjects in the curriculum. Additionally, imposing stricter laws and punishement should be introduced as a deterrent against those breaking the laws by heavy monetary fines and enforcement of closing down businesses, ultimately discouraging them from repeating polluting activities.
In conclusion, although increasing taxation on industries may reduce the environmental pollution to some extent, I believe that stricter penalties and public awareness of the importance of the protection of the planet would be more effective measures to solve underlying causes of these issues. I am also convinced that once these approaches are implemented, there will be more people to obey these new regulations, creating a fresher and cleaner environment for everyone.
- Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can get so much information through the Internet and study just as well at home To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010 78
- The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organizations 73
- Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em from repeating polluting activities. In conclusion, although increasing taxat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89226519337 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23093549478 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530386740331 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2270309702 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.076923077 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192032669268 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744380618617 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611086907747 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134346560554 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511553046344 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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