It is an astonishing fact that multiple factors determine the behaviour of the child. Some people opine that, violence in the medias are the determinants of cruel character in children. But others opine that peer groups and parental infuances make a giant role in the character modification of children. I admit that, children have the great affinity to their parents and peer groups.
Admittedly,social medias are seductive and play a counterpart in the developmental stages. Children watches different kind of movies, shortfilms and other programmes. It may fickle their character. Moreover, war and other crimes are the most popular articles in the newspaper nowadays. In certain cases, children intrigue to follow the viewed item that propagates violence. However, it is not necessary that they follow all the unwanted news or quotes from the scene. Children's are mastered enough to be practical.
On the other hand, peer groups and parental role s are greatly influencing children's character. To substanciate, childrens are mostly attached to their parents and peers. They easily pick up the nature what they see actually. For example; child of a drunkard starts drinking in their early childhood.
Moreover, poverty, homelessness, lack of education all these factors contribute smaller proportion in violence. All these comes in environmental factores. Children do what, they see in their life. Most substantial fact is that children of good parents lead a life similar to their parents.
To sum up, no need to be perfectionist, instead live in a peaceful manner. New generations are the viewers of this trend. It help to develop a perfect society.
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Essay evaluation report
Children watches
Children watch
Children's are mastered enough to be practical.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
All these comes in environmental factores.
All these com in environmental factors.
To sum up, no need to be perfectionist, instead live in a peaceful manner.
Description: what is the subject for this sentence? can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: It help to develop a perfect society.
Description: The fragment It help to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace help with verb, past tense
Sentence: But others opine that peer groups and parental infuances make a giant role in the character modification of children.
Error: infuances Suggestion: ?
Sentence: Admittedly,social medias are seductive and play a counterpart in the developmental stages.
Error: medias Suggestion: media
Sentence: To substanciate, childrens are mostly attached to their parents and peers.
Error: substanciate Suggestion: substantiate
Error: childrens Suggestion: children
Sentence: All these comes in environmental factores.
Error: factores Suggestion: factors
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Different Words: 157 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1353 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.144 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.81 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.955 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.772 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.264 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.486 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , social
...r parents and peer groups. Admittedly,social medias are seductive and play a counter...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hes different kind of movies, shortfilms and other programmes. It may fickle thei...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a peaceful manner" with adverb for "peaceful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... need to be perfectionist, instead live in a peaceful manner. New generations are the viewers of thi...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...tions are the viewers of this trend. It help to develop a perfect society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'kind of', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269102990033 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102990033223 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0365448504983 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498338870432 0.0437548338989 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.093023255814 0.122226691241 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0132890365449 0.0403226058552 33% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.99310874497 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0299003322259 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00664451827243 0.00163938923432 405% => OK
Determiners: 0.0897009966777 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00332225913621 0.021408717616 16% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00996677740864 0.011925033212 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1665.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 316.048096192 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35496183206 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.412213740458 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.328244274809 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25572519084 0.203846283523 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167938931298 0.137316102897 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99310874497 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.2911737315 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 11.9090909091 20.7743622355 57% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2761318688 49.517814964 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6818181818 127.492653851 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9090909091 20.7743622355 57% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 44.73351839 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.63768115942 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396410192056 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0934720946696 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0938616230594 0.0668466124924 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46154448872 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129453410278 0.148594505496 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128320712913 0.134430193775 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1000722476 0.0742795772207 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.259438442148 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.13575570973 0.0638462369009 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23439572181 0.228012699653 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127258018949 0.058150111329 219% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.41683366733 293% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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