Human lifestyle is pampering in the lap of technology. Presently, some masses have tendency to substitute books into internet in the upcoming era and therefore it invites manifold positive outcomes for pupils.Here, I would like to account for pros of this trend than cons in the impending paragraphs.
There are multifarious merits of this phenomenon. First and foremost,juvenile have bucket of knowledge at fingerprints or computers.To cite an example, children can accumulate wider range of knowledge with the help of google in order to attain flying colours in the exams.As a consequence,social media up lifts the standard of academic skills of students.Beside this,electronic devices are portable device rather than books.To demonstrate, people have to carry only one internet device from one place to another areas while travelling and thus do not require to carry bunch of books with them.As a consequence, adolescent can enjoy the benefit of internet during journey.
Further emphasising on my point of view, internet store of value as compares to books. For instance, internet do not have depreciation value or risk of loss and information can be store for a long period of time whereas books can tear and lost.Consequently,people can save detail for long lasting.Apart from it,business man can store profuse data in a single website with the help of internet apps.To elaborate, entrepreneur does not require to make ledgers in separate book accounts and which is difficult to write gigantic amount of data in sole book.Moreover, internet also provide benfit of security.Hence, people can save hefty amount of data ins single folder with safety at internet sites.
To recapitulate, social websites are gaining prevalence in this contemporary world.There are few demerits of this trend but internet provide ample of benefits regarding studies.Therefore, adolescents can uplift the statistical standard of education with the help of internet sites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48344370861 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43776231401 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 235.551285633 49.4020404114 477% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.571428571 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.1428571429 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8571428571 7.06120827912 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 79.0 5.01903807615 1574% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170333486894 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726810427091 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426463528252 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103104366896 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189991518794 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 10.91 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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