Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that a bad condition should be accepted while others claim that it would be better to struggle in such situations to make them prove. I believe everything everything can be changed if you make an effort.
People can change their situations as they wish although sometimes it seems too hard. For instance if you work somewhere does not provide enough facilities to keep you rewarding, you can leave there easily to find better option. But sometimes it would be impossible to you leave your job because it would be risky or even it might be take long time to find somewhere that you desire. But you can handle it by your tact. You can first find your new job before leave your current job so it help you keep your opportunities to make an aware choice.
The other problem can people may be involved with is the place they live. All countries do not have standard conditions to persuade their residents to stay due to lots of problems that they are challenging with them such as crisis economic, pollution, high cost of life, war and the other issues. Therefore migration has occurred because people prefer to leave their hometown to find the best place to live. It is not something simple that everyone able to do because they will face lots of challenging during this process but it is not impossible to do if you want it indeed.
But we do not forget sometimes there are some problems that are not unavoidable since they cover a wide rage of society which people are not able to cope with them alone. It demands a huge effort and support that be done from government side but this is not mean we cannot do anything even in such situations. For example, considering a country that face a natural disaster like earthquake or jungle firing. People can have a pivotal role to help the government to reduce the range of destruction through voluntary cooperation.
In conclusion, I believe people have enough power to make any changes even when it looks more than their abilities since the world is compromise of people then they can make it as they want even in taught situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: everything
...ituations to make them prove. I believe everything everything can be changed if you make an effort. ...
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Line 2, column 488, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...job before leave your current job so it help you keep your opportunities to make an ...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...cost of life, war and the other issues. Therefore migration has occurred because people p...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'forget'.
Suggestion: sometimes forget
...o if you want it indeed. But we do not forget sometimes there are some problems that are not un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64516129032 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48533099574 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505376344086 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.863407174 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163335005321 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582880662027 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603931793044 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989227297309 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675245788705 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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