Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it is common for people to meet different situations in their lives. Some people think that we should accept the bad situation while it is considered by others that we can change and improve this situations. In my opinion, I firmly believe that we need to learn how to accept bad situations and try our best to change its at the same time.
There are many reasons why people need to accept some bad phenomenons. Firstly, it is clear that many difficulties we will meet in our lives, which we cannot change by ourselves, such as the lover pass, parents get serious illness etc. These kinds of things that we cannot change by ourslves. If we accept earlier, we can escape the sadness quickly. Sesondly, accpet some bad things can improve our anti-pressure ability. This is because many people will change their thinkings, which means that they will consider this situation is good for their growth. When they meet the bad situation, they can accept it smoothly.
However, not only are we need to learn how to accpet the bad situations, but also try to change it. There are many bad things we can change by ourselves, such as unsatisfactory job and shortage of money. We can find another jobs or do more job to earn more money. When we change our bad situation or overcome the difficulties, we will have a great sense of successful, which can improve our confidence. Meanwhile, we improve our bad situations once, we will get a higher standard of life level. Moreover, in this improve and try process, we can strengthen ourselves abilities, which means that when we meet other bad things, we will have courage to change or overcome it.
In conclusion, accpetting bad situation is significant thing in our lives, while try to improve or change it also important in the development of one's life.
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76433121019 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63153696818 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452229299363 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7588753122 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194608455896 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883459450862 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510660253287 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1500722347 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052060660965 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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