Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are people in this world, who are of the idea that it is probably best to accept an unpleasant situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or being short of money, rather than try and do something about it. On the contrary, we have some people that preach us not to tolerate such situations and always keep striving for betterment. I personally tend to incline towards the latter ideology, while maintaining sympathy for the others.
Surviving in this world is not easy, let alone becoming successful. Therefore, some people do not struggle more than necessary to change their lives. Such people try to be content and grateful for what they have, although it may not be much. Because there is so much competition in every field of work, people do not take risks anymore. Statistics from Harvard School of Economics last year showed that only one out of thousand entrepreneurs become successful. This study favors the notion that it is wiser to accept your place in life. To put it simply, people who don’t struggle for betterment have accepted their fates and are happy with what they have.
On the other hand, individuals who argue for struggling and improving their situation, do it because they are ambitious. They believe in the philosophy of hard work and self-worth. No great thing was ever achieved by accepting the fate and losing hope, rather great achievements were made possible by perpetual hard work and high ambitions. There are many examples in contemporary world, like Microsoft, Apple and Facebook that would not have been made, if their inventors had accepted their situation and never tried. Hence, having ambitions along with the stamina for hard work is the key to get out of badly stagnant situations in life.
In conclusion, both philosophies have their strong point but I would always choose the latter one. Even though accepting your fate is lot easier, the reward you get for struggling to improve your situation easily outweighs anything else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ob or being short of money, rather than try and do something about it. On the contrary,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00604229607 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63241350506 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601208459215 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4608730312 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4705882353 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208517674656 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060555525929 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650679856742 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129201186403 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655900017952 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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