There are different views with regard to accepting a poor condition (dissatisfaction from job or money). Some people tend to toward the viewpoint that it is best to agree with that, whereas others are inclined to believe that it is much better to find a solution and improve such circumstances. I am personally prone to support the opinion of the latter.
People who are in favour of accepting the bad situation put forth several arguments. A primary attraction is it is easy and peaceful for some who does not want to come out of their comfort zone. Furthermore, some people think that they are not ready for any transitions. Such people would prefer fidgeting about their conditions, rather than taking some actions to make better it.
On the contrary, some people go against all odds and achieve what they want. They believe that they can either make or break their life. Such kind of people know what they deserve and do not blame others for their conditions, thus they can make a better life for themselves. For example, my grandparents had wanted my mother to become a doctor, however she was interested in cooking. Then my mother had fought for what she actually wanted and now she is the best cook and has several restaurants in city.
To sum up, it is better to take an effort to improve the one's life rather than accepting rough situation. As a result those people have a better perspective as by putting hard work they can rely on themselves than anyone else or their fate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, kind of, as a result, on the contrary, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69465648855 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55002967838 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3903933392 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244007136981 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823261420595 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641128506019 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15509344455 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788293414971 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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