Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Try try until you don’t succeed. It is easy to accept the situation and do nothing, but I believe facing it not only helps to overcome the situation but also strengthen us.
Accepting any serious or unsatisfactory situation like money shortage or an unwilling job is the biggest sacrifice in someone’s life, but sometimes, in some situations accepting the situation is preferable. For instance, if someone has a job with a good package and is working in a stressful environment is always willing to quit his job, but on the other hand he has many reasons to continue his job. Like getting a regular pay check every month, 5 days working and 2 days vacation. Hence, accepting a bad situation is not always a bad idea.
Improving our situations, tackling our problems always help to increase our confidence, strengthen us and our will to work rises. Not every time accepting the situation works. For example, if someone is doing a job in thermal company but is reluctant to work their due to his field of interest then he should try to switch to another job within his field of interest. This will encourage more to dedicate his time and investment and apart from that it will make him happy. Not only that but he will explore that field more willingly. Hence in certain situations tackling the problem and overcoming the situation is preferred.
Therefore, according to me facing our situation and overcoming that helps to live a happy life and encourage us to become a more independent person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Try
Try try until you don’t succeed. It is easy to ...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...will explore that field more willingly. Hence in certain situations tackling the prob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82558139535 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78430846988 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9088339769 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7692307692 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284354881276 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107135934333 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104959042668 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169349528352 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970393545752 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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