Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
When unhappy situations occur such as a low level of finance or an unsatisfied job, some people can tend to accept this while others prefer to improve them by making more effort. Those have reasonable motives but it is better if people have a different identity to categorize both of them into a process of surpassing a situation, the first is accepting it then overcoming.
The acceptance of an unhappy, unwilling situation comes to teach people a lesson about impermanence and warn people about what they are doing wrong in life. Instead of being angry or upset with what is happening, people need to go with the flow, be patient, and be self-inquiry to find which extrinsic or intrinsic factors cause this situation. For example, a teacher in Covid 19 pandemic, found that she cannot access her students due to the lockdown. Since she opened this class, she is always teaching in class and never using online before, she felt upset and her income could be disrupted if she cannot teach anymore. However, after feeling nervous, she felt better when she realized that this is the thing that will be taken in the fluctuating time of the pandemic. Therefore, instead of worrying, she should be pessimistic and seize the solution.
After people realize their problems and accept what happened to them, it is encouraged to give the best effort for improving bad situations. It can be a succinct plan with both internal and external resources that support them grow faster and sustainably. People should look around for the operation or the support of whoever prefers to go with them. Enhancing their knowledge, skills, and also keeping a positive, grateful attitude are the best keys to move them out of an unwilling situation in finance and an unsatisfied job. If this teacher realizes her shortage in the updated technology in teaching and learning, she can build an e-learning space and continue to attract her students to join her virtual class. Besides, she must self-study to apply the latest technology and also some useful techniques to manage her classroom wisely. This is the long and hard process of upgrading herself to find a better solution to diminish her problems.
A perception of people about a specific situation, especially when bad situations occur is very essential since it can decide what they can achieve in the long-term based on their attitude and action. It is the best way to consider both of the two steps of the process to overcome any unhappy situation than using only either of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92723004695 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62626963656 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530516431925 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.781972416 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.470588235 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0588235294 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192507412659 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636548047284 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662602165258 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137286448157 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656464364709 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.