Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Spme people accept bad situation but that make they don't have good feeling in their life, the reason is they think have great life are impossible so they accept have the life with less of good things which one make your life funny and have a lot of smile. Some people think just try your best to change their situation because just have one time to live so they try to make that better and they wants have great life.
In my opinion i like to try something to make my life better because all of we always wants have large house a car and rich life, of course accept wit what we have not bad idea but if you have bad situation bad feeling will come and you have a lot of health problem and if you just have one time to live why don't you make your life better and get out the safe zone. I think enjoy our life are the best so i choose to make my life better and enjoy that.
In conclusion, I prefer make my life better and enjoy it, maybe some people choose other option but i have something to talk with them that please try to get out your safe zone and try to improve yourself, your life and you will see that very important.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...oney. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Spme people ac...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...accept bad situation but that make they dont have good feeling in their life, the re...
^^^^
Line 1, column 423, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun smile seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of smiles'.
Suggestion: a lot of smiles
...which one make your life funny and have a lot of smile. Some people think just try your best t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 578, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...o they try to make that better and they wants have great life. In my opinion i like ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y wants have great life. In my opinion i like to try something to make my life b...
^
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...my life better because all of we always wants have large house a car and rich life, o...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d if you just have one time to live why dont you make your life better and get out t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 405, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I think enjoy our life are the best so i choose to make my life better and enjoy...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10116731518 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95485699768 2.80592935109 70% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428015564202 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.065345602 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.571428571 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7142857143 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26702055046 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199825350019 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154086854684 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191793081058 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914433554408 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.09 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...oney. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Spme people ac...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...accept bad situation but that make they dont have good feeling in their life, the re...
^^^^
Line 1, column 423, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun smile seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of smiles'.
Suggestion: a lot of smiles
...which one make your life funny and have a lot of smile. Some people think just try your best t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 578, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...o they try to make that better and they wants have great life. In my opinion i like ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y wants have great life. In my opinion i like to try something to make my life b...
^
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...my life better because all of we always wants have large house a car and rich life, o...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d if you just have one time to live why dont you make your life better and get out t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 405, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I think enjoy our life are the best so i choose to make my life better and enjoy...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10116731518 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95485699768 2.80592935109 70% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428015564202 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.065345602 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.571428571 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7142857143 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26702055046 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199825350019 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154086854684 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191793081058 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914433554408 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.09 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.