In some countries, some one thing it is necessary to spend large of government budget on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
With railway for train that is good way for come to another cities. but the covid-19 is very dangerous so the train is not attractive than the public transport. With public transport people can get to anywhere they want and the most important is that cheaper than railway with the government. So for me i will chose the public transport.
Use public transport people can get more free and that a great way for family, train is good for people who want to have more friend but that is
reduces when the covid-19 come. But if you want to get fast to anther city you can use train, pub lic transport is more expensive with some people but with government that is cheaper. Maybe the public transport are base on the geographical advantages, because wwith train we can easy to go to somewhere and don't need to have a driving license and just enjoy the trip, but with public transport people need to drive a car, maybe it good for people who like driving car but when the geographical advandtages are so hard the driver need to drive good and more careful.
Inconclution, i like to spend money budget on public transport because it cheaper for government budget and very useful for our live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...is good way for come to another cities. but the covid-19 is very dangerous so the t...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... railway with the government. So for me i will chose the public transport. Use p...
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Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...y with the government. So for me i will chose the public transport. Use public trans...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rain we can easy to go to somewhere and dont need to have a driving license and just...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e good and more careful. Inconclution, i like to spend money budget on public tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6746031746 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4639118649 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.5935823595 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357172449989 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17543947579 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121375938086 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245200266918 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186086002493 0.056905535591 327% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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