The bar chart below show average percentages typical meals. all of which may unhealthy if eaten so much. We can see dinner have most sodium and saturated fat respectively 43% and 37% at the same most added sugar are from snacks with the number are 42%, with our health snacks are most unhealthy typical meals because most of sugar can make your body fat. Dinner have the most nutrients total 113%, every typical meal are unhealthy if you if it too much, if you eat so much breakfast and that make you can't eat dinner or lunch that make you deficit nutrients or if you eat too much dinner you will add to your body a lot of sodium and saturatetd fat.
In conclusion, if you eat too much any typical meal or don't eat any typical meal you wil have too much or deficit some of 3 nutrients in the bar chart so eat all of typical meals to keep your body healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23170731707 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09834075126 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493902439024 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.033459804 43.030603864 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.8 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32393358483 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237889208559 0.103423049105 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127401377463 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269482472102 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00837518894517 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.85 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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