Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, people’s attitude to life situation has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although overcoming hardship should be encouraged, acceptance of unpleasant situations would benefit for people in life.
There are various compelling reasons to encourage people get over difficult situations. First, ambition to improve one’s situation could create life-changing event. For instance, one decides to give up their current jobs to pursue higher education, improve their skills and knowledge in order to land a high-paid job, thus they can afford for household’s bills, children’s better schools and taking care of their families. Second, improving an unfavoured situation could create positive changes in one’s mental health. Plenty evidence suggests that leaving an unsatisfactory job with unsupportive colleagues or mean bosses days by days could release one’s emotions and feelings, which not only takes away negative energy from surrounding environment but also offers new opportunities to add values to their life.
Nevertheless, acceptance is a vital attitude towards life situations. First, being happy with whatever one has could reduce greedy and mental health issues and increase positiveness. It is seen that many people live in poverty may experience difficulties in finance affairs, however, they are likely to have simple life issues, better bonding with family members and enjoy family time. In contrast, high-profile individuals earning significant amount of money could struggle with work and life balance, experience mental health issues or may end up in loneliness due to their busy schedule. Second, positive and negative situations are barely based on personal and subjective judgement. For example, though a low-paid job could be a dissatisfactory career to one person, it could be a dream of many others who wish to be able to work, to contribute for society and to support their family even with minimum wages. Therefore, it is impossible to evaluate a situation as good or bad objectively.
In conclusion, although self-improvement should be encouraged, self-acceptance is far more significant for people to enjoy quality of life. Should people accept and be happy with their current situation, they will be more contented and positive in life, which attracts positive changes in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65915492958 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11089235745 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602816901408 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5565192847 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5625 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112515073977 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419191511893 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230978034893 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717326087351 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183547130464 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.