Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of mony. Others argue that it is better o try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Along with the life of us, we confront with many bad situations. Some people think the best solution is that we should accept them but the second group of people believes we can make these situations better.
the career is one of the most important factors in during the life of each person. Many people introduce themselves with their job positions, so it is very critical that we are satisfied with our job. a stressful job or an undesired job can be harmful to mind and body health. It is not a good idea that we accept a bad carrier.
The first reason that causes people to want to work is money. A job with a good salary makes the employee happy and give self-confident to him/her. Intelligent people develop their abilities to take better job positions. Not only they find a better job or workplace, but also they improve their knowledge and talents. It helps them to be more confident.
Otherwise, there are many situations that they are not under our control. for example, have an accident or lost something in our life. I think for these situations that we can not have any control of them, the best practice is to accept them and try to forget them.
To sum up, in my opinion, it is very important that people are satisfied with their life. If they have some bad situations, they should try to fix them and makes them better. However, there are some terrible moments in our life which are uncontrolable. we should just accept them and try to do not remember them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, i think, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56554307116 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46984932825 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4133804475 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.7222222222 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206068682015 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651510278585 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460879339316 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124730157789 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340947353006 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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