It is often opined by some that, people ought to accept whatever the lifes throws at an individual, whether it is a disappointing job or lack of financial stability, whereas some other believe in looking for better opportunities. In this essay i will discuss both point of views and will explain why i prefer in improving bad situations in ones life.
Some people consider that the best choice of action is to accept the bad situations and not to fight for a better outcome. Everyone of us is unique, and our intellectual thinking ability differs from one human to another, so whenever people face an unfavorable situation only few among them shows the courage to fight on, while others tend to adopt it and moves on. To elucidate, people might get afraid to change their current situation, as the future is uncertain, they fear that, if they try to act they may loose their current stability. For example, if they try to get a better job, they may not succeed; thus endangering their family and the only source of income.
On the other hand, some people thinks that it is better to change rather than adusting with the circumstances they detest. It is obvious that lot of huge effort and time is required to get success and fame. Life will always test each ones ability to cope or to survive. To exemplify, things will not always favour in our way, we may feel discouraged, lost or even lose our hope while trying to build a better fortune. Eventhough once we succeed, we feel a sense of achievement at that moment we realizes that we lived up to our dreams. Furthermore, all these hardships and efforts will eventually turn to a fruitful one in way or other.
To conclude, being afraid is normal, but it is better to overcome it and do where our mind wanders. It is true that it will be a painful journey at the beginning, once we embrace it we can lead a beautiful and successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58235294118 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58174989609 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567647058824 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4229972084 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188160219607 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638687008897 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615784227838 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112923837821 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786668244735 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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