It could be said that accepting a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or lack of money is best.However, there is another opinion that trying to change and improving such conditions is better.I agree with the second statement and there are some reason that will support my opinion.
To begin with, people all over the world, are involved in serious situations where they have to work hard from early in the morning till late night .Still, they cannot get larger salaries, which is only enough to live without luxury.The reason behind this problem is a lack of jobs worldwide.In this case, if they quit their jobs, they would be helpless to live on roads without money or food, therefore they cannot afford to do so.That is why, people consider it a better option to accept situations in their life that are difficult.
on the other hand, sometimes people try to fight with problems and they got succeed. Moreover, they become able to get improved position at workplace.For example, one of my friend miss. Raman work for a terrible company, which made her work in the bad situations like in unsatisfaction and less salary.However, she consultanted many people from his parents to friends and his decision to change the job released her from bad situation.She also moved to the better place to live in and new job gives her a larger salary and free time now.
I think, through understanding the case of my friend, I firmly believe that the improvement from the worse situation absolutely makes people happier and more comfortable in their life.
In conclusion, I definitely agree with the opinion that people should do not compromise with the unfavourable condition, instead of this, they should fight with the problematic situations to convert them in happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9932885906 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79042937624 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.32791914 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.571428571 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5714285714 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5714285714 7.06120827912 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223527546328 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108546001876 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115244678232 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133653654525 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128679496433 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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