Nowadays, most of the people are suffering from chronic diseases, these are the result of sedentary lifestyle. Some people have an opinion that, educating children about health in the schools, is the greatest way to reduce health issues from a society. I completely agree with this notion. As there are numerous reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, in the classrooms, children learn new things quickly as compared to home, if there are more lessons related with health and physical education, then they will readily learn about ways to keep them fit and healthy. Moreover, under the supervision of teachers, children can acquire the knowledge of following a healthy lifestyle from the start. For example, these days most of the children have working parents. In this case, children can manage things on their own, such as, what to eat and when to eat. This will only become possible, if children are well informed about healthy eating habits.
In addition, it is believed that, a habit that is developed during younger age in life is more likely to stay with them throughout their life. Since children are well aware about healthy lifestyle, they will help the other people by their knowledge, in the upcoming future. They can motivate the people around them. Adding to this, obesity is the root cause for several diseases and it is common among children during these days. To overcome this problem medicines are not enough, healthy eating habits are also required, which can be instilled in children at school level.
In conclusion, I think inculcating physical education to children at the right age will help overweight problems and they also encourage other people to follow healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08865248227 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44833183129 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7125231082 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27661204361 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863751385043 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062376043732 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163743394956 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609949786181 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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