Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situations such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the today's era, every individual want a satisfactory job as well as huge sums of salary, nowadays a host of people believe it is beneficial to join unsatisfactory job and less salary whereas some say it is better to try and improve such situations. Each view point have their own justification, I will discuss my views in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, in the new millennium, accepting job which is not related to stream or earning less salaries is extremely beneficial. The most obvious benefit is that, individual can learn how to tackle with sitautions. To clarify, if a fresher get huge salaries and satisfactory job then they can not learn vourse situation in life, however if in working lifestyle they get less salary then they understand how to manage it and also learn problems by which they get deep knowledge. To cite an example, in 2010 the well known Software Engineer, Mark Zukerburg got a first job of watchman, he worked almost 5years in a same field, in that years he learn the social life problems. Therefore, it is best to work at less salary to become managable person in own life.
Aside from this, some people say it is better to overcome with the situations. The most obivious advantage is that people live luxary life. To elaborate, if a person can work hard and tackle with problem and switch to satisfactory job then individual live luxarious life. This result in living satisfactory life by fulfill every single need. Hence to live in better environment it is best to tackle with situations.
In my opinion, working hard is best in which people live in better condition, it is good to try again and again and improve difficult situations.
In conclusion, both view point have their own justification but according to my prespective changing position in company is best part of life, it is good to stay at one job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
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Suggestion: try to
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun salaries is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ich is not related to stream or earning less salaries is extremely beneficial. The m...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...years in a same field, in that years he learn the social life problems. Therefore, it...
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: is the best
...respective changing position in company is best part of life, it is good to stay at one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77329192547 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77892703701 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509316770186 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3785440871 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200079389821 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658311464456 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587809545894 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121427490762 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662620962218 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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