Having an unfavourable situations are part of life, some believe that it is better to adopt in these circumstance without putting any effort. However, few believes that everyone should try to work in these situation until it gets better. In my opinion, I believe that person should put efforts in improving its difficult situations so that he can become more accustomed to any challenges in his life.
A society which agrees to accept any bad situations of an unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of money have a huge fear of failing . In other words, they feel that any attempt would actually worsen the situation for them. This might be due to the series of bad incidents which they have faced in their life. These people generally believe that unfavourable situations are destined in their life and working at these times won't be helpful for their professional or personal life.
However, another set of community believes that hard work is the main skill where person can work to improve its oWn destiny and make things turn towards its favour.These people do not give up in any walk of life and firmly agree that every day cannot be a happy place. Any bad situation is a part of life where person should be up for any challenge and be brave enough to face it. It surely gives a sense of maturity and content.
In my opinion, I do agree that determination and confidence to improve your own situation should be considered as best life lesson. I remember an incident where I was short of data to write about my science project on environmental problems due to internet issues and soon I came up with the idea of making an intercative report of the actual problems which people face. Moreover, this turned towards my favour as well and got a good grade in my assignment.
There are two methods where a person can think of its own situation. One being to try and align its own fate in favour and the other to give up and leave its life on destiny. A person should be wise enough to choose between these two.
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- The bar chart shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey Summarise the information wherever relevant 78
- The chart illustrates the consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
Having an unfavourable situations are part of life, some believe that it ...
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Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...ves that everyone should try to work in these situation until it gets better. In my opinion, I ...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
...any bad situations of an unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of money have a huge fear o...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...age of money have a huge fear of failing . In other words, they feel that any atte...
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Line 6, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fe. However, another set of community believes that hard work is the main skil...
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Line 6, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...and make things turn towards its favour.These people do not give up in any walk of li...
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Line 10, column 83, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...hink of its own situation. One being to try and align its own fate in favour and the o...
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Line 10, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... its own situation. One being to try and align its own fate in favour and the oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, moreover, so, well, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63966480447 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56391213888 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527932960894 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6645571089 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205771288196 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746508529613 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633725760326 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114821092822 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515637782175 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.