Agreeing with the above satement,some criminals never improve themselves.Neither they have the fear of death nor with anyone else.They neither have regret on what they have done, they are also likely to call psycho killer.Nearly, few months ago a person killed his whole family .When cops caught him he was laughing.What does it mean? Is he mad or what .Some criminals are too much dangerous they perform a deadful act.Terrorist are the those people who commite crime for their own country inside other terrority.They never change themselves.They are trained to destroy others country.Such poleople are hinders that shouldn't be lest freely because of them many bomb attack took place.Many family got destroyed many child became orphange many parents didn't have support during old age.Seeing the condition of family they should be hung over to the death.
While, on other side I am satisfied with the the account on not keeping the prisoner only in prisions because some criminals commite the crime for self defence,for the protection of others and the country.They become criminal due to the condition. Some commite crime due to their mental disorder so these types of people should get proper traeatment.One of my friends killed his father.He was sent to the mental hospital and his treatment is going on.Those criminal whose crime is not so dangerous and have regret on what they have done, they should be provided second chance.Some crime are commited for the welfare of the society such as killing rapiest,murder,terrorist and so on is likely to the welfare of the country although it is for the benefits of country it is also regarded as crime.This types of criminals should be given second chance.
In eduction, crime is a crime wether it is small are dreadful wether it is for the welfare of someone.We are not allowed to punish anyone.So criminals should be kept in prision only so that others may feel secure outside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05956112853 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96088433035 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548589341693 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.54381422 49.4020404114 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.8 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.8 20.7667163134 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116271417142 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08276939753 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685972870124 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818893145284 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353311286364 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 13.0946893788 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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