Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
According some people free information sharing is good for society, however others say that some information is so important to share. S
Due to technological developments it is important now to share knowledge and information with others as it makes people aware of improvement. However, there are types of information which people consider as personal and can not spreaded.
Today every single day appear new technologies. It means that it is so important to share with this information because it helps us be aware of events happening around us. Besides this researches can be used for invent new technologies which will lead to improvements in developing of living standards and show a great improvement. For example research around medicine. We can get any organism by bottomland cages. This discovery allows us get away from donor's organs. Sharing with this kind of information can be useful for students it allows them to be more professional.
On the other side sharing with a lot of information can be dangerous. For example researches which are connected with nuclear weapon are very confidential and secret. If this kind of information find wrong hands it can cause terroristic threat and war. Actually, secrets of any company which are connected with financial services also confidential. Distribution of this information can cause problems with finance because this information are really important to be better than competitor. Also it can cause loss of competitive ability.
In conclusion I prefer stay neutral. It is important to share information with others for developing our world, however information which consider as secrets of state should stay confidential.
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- A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at an institutions or organisation as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement? 56
- Many of world's cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? 61
- More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative? 73
- The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. 67
- The use of mobile phones has increased dramatically in recent years. What are the positive and negative effects of this trend? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ith this information because it helps us be aware of events happening around us. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...important to be better than competitor. Also it can cause loss of competitive abilit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36842105263 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08957834907 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537593984962 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6629998387 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270688089961 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931844113598 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105583444802 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207591032552 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100369131879 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.