Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.
These years have seem rapidly changes in the way of acquiring information.Not long years ago,we were accustomed to paper-based information as the information from Internet was difficult to get ,store and also expensive.But now,everything changed.
We can easily to download one paper or search any other useful information in few seconds.Some paper is charged but not as expensive as it used to be.Most of them is free.It makes possible for students or other people who interested on one area start some scientific research or acquire this area’s academic knowledge.To some extent,it promotes the development of scientific and academic research.
However,some information may be classified and should not be shared freely in business world .It is illegal to leak commercial confident documents.Those classified information is of great value and losing them does pretty harm to the company. Also in scientific world,some information may be relevant to military secrets,like the high resolution images from satellites.It is inaccessible and unsafe for normal people to get those clear images which may be included some military secrets.
It is true that future trend is more information online.I have been being benefited by this.My school have bought the use right of many digital libraries,so it is convenient for me to search scientific papers when I face some academic problems.In my study life,I need to process a lot of satellite images which are secret or expensive ten years ago but now open and free.Those normal resolution data is enough for my study but for those researchers who want high resolution data they need to pay more or even can’t get the data.In my opinion,those classified data should not shared freely,but other information should be shared online as much as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38869257951 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14713064873 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593639575972 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.562480296 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.0 106.682146367 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.6 20.7667163134 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283804889613 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150284349695 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505777103277 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161783667846 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610858698898 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 10.7795591182 306% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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