Nowadays, as we are living in a modern digital information era, whether science or other technology have progressed at an incredible speed. Some people consider that all information should be shared as much as possible all over the world, while others have the opposite opinion. In my view, I totally think that some essential information couldn’t be spread freely. And the reasons are discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, it should be stuck in mind that sharing is a valuable virtue, and this world could be more equal and peaceful if each country shares its necessary information without any selfish or narrow nationalism. But considering the practical situation that, all countries are filled with doubts and lack trust, keeping this frail balance seems to be impossible. However, even it comes true, once a country breaks the balance, and no country will follow the rule.
On the other hand, advanced technology, which likes a precious treasure, can become the biggest motivation asking governments to invest funds to the research. Moreover, the fund is just an aspect of all cost, it will take much amount of energy and time accomplish the research, countless scientists spend all their life making just a little progress in their fields. Such valuable information is too essential to be shared freely. if precious information was spread freely, no government would think about surpassing others and human beings’ progress would be frozen.
Because the reason mentioned above, although sharing necessary information reduce conflicts over the world and had a lot of advantages, not only this statement cannot come true, but also ensuring the value of the advanced knowledge can promote the society’s progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...n is too essential to be shared freely. if precious information was spread freely,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30935251799 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80935942666 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636690647482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1139645798 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30141104408 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116931471858 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10899603431 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170130395198 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846248494904 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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