In a growing world of intellectuals, there is a lot of pressure on important avenues such as research , business and academic world to prosper. While some people are of the opinion that sharing information is vital for progress, others feel some data is much too valuable to be shared publicly. I believe there are both advantages and disadvantages to this premise.
The sharing of knowledge increases knowledge. We live in a world where new inventions are happening everyday in various fields and through sharing, we are updated with new technologies. Scientific research is a booming area that thrives on newly gained knowledge. For example, research in biological and pharmacological techniques saw a surge after the opening up of portals where journals of experiments and their methods could be published by the scientists themselves. These ventures give hope to upcoming scientists to build their own research and build their careers.
However, distribution of knowledge at a global level does have its risks. In the process of sharing, the source of the information might be lost and can land in the hands of a third party which can be misused in various ways. For instance, confidential information about research related to a deadly weapon could cause havoc when in wrong hands. Furthermore, data like finances and agreements of companies are considered confidential and can bring the value of the company down if shared.
In conclusion, my opinion is that information that can be used to better the life of people in the society and help the progress of research must be shared and confidential data that could cause potential problems must be safeguarded
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- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re on important avenues such as research , business and academic world to prosper....
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17343173432 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0004234851 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3148185191 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299052727609 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888528106532 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957856048252 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187921695944 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156619366298 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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