While sharing information knowledge will be increase and some people believe that scientific information business and academic related information should be shared very freely. Others opinion, that it is better to keep information very confidential. In my opinion, there is many benefit and drawbacks are available.
On one hand, sharing information will increase knowledge and up to date update the new invention in medical, business, research and new technology. Its helps to develop there knowledge and for the betterment of the society. To sharing new well fare scheme information to share other country, its help to develop our country and if its good other country well fare scheme, to implement in our country. The invention of stem cells, nano technology, AI and mobile technology to sharing such useful invention and information helps the students to be up to date with the recent procedures and become much better professionals. Many countries are sharing information with other country, as specially GPS telecommunication department to share their satellites with other country. This is helping to other country.
On the other hand, sharing too much information can be dangerous. For example research related to weapons and nuclear science is extremely sensitive and confidential. If it is get information with wrong person, they sale it other country for big amount and it is not safety for our country, terrorist may attack our country and our country economic may fallen down. We have to face economic crises and many people loss their jobs,will increase unemployment problem and very competitive edge. Even, If share medical,business and financial related information definitely will affect our country. We should not share sensitive information to other people.
To conclude, my opinion is a neutral one. It is extremely very important for the sharing information student, science and business level, but it is equally crucial to safeguard the information that is sensitive to companies and the country.
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...y confidential. In my opinion, there is many benefit and drawbacks are available. On one ...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ase knowledge and up to date update the new invention in medical, business, research and new ...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...country, its help to develop our country and if its good other country well fare ...
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Line 3, column 695, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rmation with other country, as specially GPS telecommunication department to shar...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , will
...c crises and many people loss their jobs,will increase unemployment problem and very ...
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Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , business
...competitive edge. Even, If share medical,business and financial related information defin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44126984127 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00570717738 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473015873016 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9002440939 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336563859221 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117553132485 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119266039072 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227505567212 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861792899965 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.