Some people believe that it is a good to share as much information as possible in scentific research, bussiness and the academic world. Other believe thar some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and g

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Some people believe that it is a good to share as much information as possible in scentific research, bussiness and the academic world. Other believe thar some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

information is the vast subject to discuss about, but sharing info has both pros and cons. one should know what information must be shared and what's need to be avoided. In this passage i am going to discuss advantages and disadvantages in either ways.

I believe we can help others with your information in academic, it's very essential in this running world because each one cannot be proficient in all the things, some may be good in one subject but lacks knowledge in the other one. so, sharing information plays a key role there and makes oneself happy. I must definitely say my situation in my school day, of course i am very good student in the class and am great at maths, but poor in history. Few teachers tell that it's very difficult for me to clear the final exam in history. By god's grace some how i have cleared the science exam that too in best grade. Do you know how? it's by sharing info, I remember that's one week before exam i am feeling very tensed then my friends came and helped me in understanding each situation in better way and give the artifacts of every lesson. I shared the same as well in maths. so, surprisingly we both stood top.

it's complete opposite when it come's to the case of business. one's information must be very it's very confidential. it's a myth that we shouldn't believe our shadow as well in business. The confidential information relating business, i.e formulas, Passwords, Softwares etc. so be very strategic when you are operating a business.

In Scientific research we should follow both safeguarding information and providing information. some secret information will be there in the research if we are not careful about it there is a chance of stolen information.

In my view both are correct and each have the significance. so, depending upon the issue one should take responsibility and share the information.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well, of course, you know, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77538461538 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80441916694 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7401454302 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9047619048 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264432570554 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746745839385 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575865510639 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14572478777 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498382779906 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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