Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research,business and the academic world .Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in
Few people trust that it is superb impact then people has sharing more than knowledge as possible in scientific research business the academic nation.Futher others person ponder that some information is too essential or too great would be share without any cost.I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
There are several reasons behind this.There most predominant in these days,technology is very swift nor everyone have consuming in their life.In facts,the scientific test method which adolescent can share the information about to the business.In addition,
business person everlasting purpose on social media as well as they could brilliant effect to work or explain their information very easily way.Moreover,
they also promoting their business on online such as clothes,shoes,outdoor games,online classes,
kitchen stuff and so on.Furthermore,youth can easily attracting in their products as far as employees have eternal sharing much information when they should never give the cash.
There are no denying the fact that, there have plethora applications either youngster might consume in their whole life.For instance,Twitter,
Snapchat,Facebook and YouTube extra.Eventually,
anyone has easier gaining their knowledge than consuming this application.lastly,
this might good for shopkeeper sometimes people never knowledge relate any gadgets.So,
who can giving information more than clients.Consequening,
when they have bright opportunity for employees career.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand employees can sharing knowledge regard their work as soon as possible kids or senior citizens might engage to products.Thus it will be good influnces for future.So shopkeeper should sharing information with any charge neither it good for their business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97426470588 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48625382356 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.033401325 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 406.25 106.682146367 381% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.0 20.7667163134 327% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.0 7.06120827912 453% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310803571036 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208714627007 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196805630126 0.0667982634062 295% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111425038706 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162884561719 0.056905535591 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.7 13.0946893788 311% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 50.2224549098 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.53 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.19 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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