Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that, it is benefical to shares large amounts of information to the general public, regarding scientific research, business and education while, others believe that some data is too precious to distribute. I agree with the latter as there are many ways inforamtion can affect a society such as it could damage an individuals feeling and can be used for a destructive purpose for which it was not intended.
Internet has been deemed the largest source of information which results that most of the work is done using internet, so in order to so work people require specific data such as business reports and educational papers. This may provide the essiential finding for a hardworking student, but can also be copied and misused in any other circumstance. For instance, many project reports are copied from other reports and finding on the internet which makes a sloid work in to garbage. For this very reason, I believe that sharing of data should be limited.
On the other hand, a good gesture can be interpreted very differently by various groups of people and the effects of that interpretion can harm a person emotional feelings. For example social media influencers are very aware of what they upload on thier accounts as some thing could affect thier lives badly, just like thier home addresses this results in 24/7 bombartments of fans at their personal house in turn, disturbing thier families.
In conclusion, putting all information for the world to see can harm someone in more ways than one, this can be emotional, and in some cases physical. In my opinion information should be assed before it is shared.
- The average standard of people s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 84
- The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport 73
- The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...res large amounts of information to the general public, regarding scientific research, busines...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...f what they upload on thier accounts as some thing could affect thier lives badly, just li...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95289855072 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6988716749 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9054051732 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.7 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213595331144 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915242852176 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878898438582 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131751359764 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571481629547 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.