Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Students who are strong mentally spend almost 25 years of their lives to achieve a professional degree either in medical or engineering. Even though a certain amount of people believe that doctors and engineers should service the country where they were trained as it is their moral duty. I agree, that professional should have the right to be able choose in part of the world they want to work as they might have better facilities which would help their carrier and their family too.
Every citizen holds a certain responsibility to be a caretaker for the city, this is why citizens believe that is a duty of the medical officer to help his community as he trained his whole life to give back to the community. Clinics are the first step to contribute toward a safe and healthy life for members of the community. Engineers are also considered the backbone of any society as they build infrastructure such as school, hospitals, office building etc which in turns helps the economy grow. Most developed countries employee engineers right from collage in order to train them for the betterment of the country.
On the other hand, A degree holder trained from one country would have similar capabilites as the one educated in other country this means that can easily work in each others places. Talented doctors who are concerned about underdeveloped country can easily travel and help the people. Moreover, many underdevelopment regions are unable to provide the level of salaries and lifestyle to the professionals which makes it very difficult for them to stay. As of now more than 70%of Pakistanis have left Pakistan due to unstable enviroment.
To conclude, doctors and engineers should have the right to choose the place where they would work it would be benefical for them and their families. Even though they have a certain responsibility to their own community but it is not right to restrict them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y but it is not right to restrict them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94409937888 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70104935264 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4482282875 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34455323034 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1119707331 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103357018859 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211629365489 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954520450923 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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