Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your opinio
Even though sometimes it is thought that circulating achieved data on science, business, and academic issues is beneficial, others claim that sharing sensitive and vulnerable information is risky. I will debate both approaches and argue that deciding whether to publish the data or not depends on its significance and magnitude.
Some assert that publishing the results of scientific experiments is practical. Letting people know about these outcomes can influence their lives. In fact, some scholarly procedures test a social, mental, or health problem that has a direct impact on the community. Hence, spreading the end results profits people. In addition, disseminating information exposes them to critics. In other words, by releasing scientific findings, the researchers let other experts criticize their job, therefore improving future work.
In contrast, others state that some scholarly data is too vital and precious to share. As a matter of fact, broadcasting the sensitive results of a test may lead to abuse. For instance, when publicizing some medical findings, non-experts may interfere and take advantage of them to propagate their own unscientific attitude. In my opinion, data should be shared based on its function. In other words, some information is too confidential that must not be released, such as some political or medical data. However, making people aware of the details of some social or health issues is essential. Giving an example, during the Covid pandemic any discovery had to become public as soon as possible.
In conclusion, although there are various attitudes towards the publicity of data, I believe that professionals should consider the impact and sensitivity of the specific information and then decide whether to share it with the public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46739130435 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92799133713 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5961424281 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294927266823 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835176647091 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694729984697 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152861894349 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053100250375 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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