Many people argue that achievements in various science fields, finance and marketing area and academic world should be publicized. Meanwhile some believe limitation in data accessing is essential.
Sharing information and experience has been promoted development in nations because it helps to save time and money by avoiding every person or organization to start from the first step of any research. Knowledge exchange Due to globalization and exponential growth of technology is the key of success for societies. A wide range of people can cooperate with each other to make great progress. Global information sharing by using internet has been a revolution in recent decades in the world. Navigation applications like Waze and X, for an instant, are based on digital data of maps which are the outputs of geographical and survey researches.
However, there are some confidential information that is vital to be restricted. Otherwise the leakage of these secrets maybe harmful, for example the result of missile and nuclear study would be abused by terrorists to create mass destructive and lead to social threats. When it comes to business, the information is a valuable asset for companies especially those related to design, composition or function of a product. Disclosing the secrets will be imitate by competitors and lead to lose the market share.
In conclusion, I believe by considering some abundance for secret information, All the society can benefited greatly by exchanging information between organizations in all aspects of science, business and academic.
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 65
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Suggestion: Otherwise,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4612244898 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09508888031 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665306122449 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6384147835 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242864182942 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822292499932 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581921883113 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135436427228 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153901774393 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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