Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is widely assumed that information should be shared as much as possible in fields of science, business and academy. However, others agree that some data cannot be given for free due to its high importance and invaluableness. In my opinion, although knowledge should be spread, there is some special information that had better be kept away from public.
On the one hand, opening essential information to the community contributes to the innovation of the whole nation. Initially, if the citizens are accessible to scientific advances, ranging from latest technological inventions to development in robotics, they can take greatest advantage of this progress to get on a better living standard. Additionally, in the field of academy, modern educational devices and approaches being introduced and applied is a vital step to improve national intellectual level.
On the other hand, there are some specialized information resources and statistic that should be restricted to public due to the fact that it may lead to unexpected risky situations and unpredictable consequences. To begin with, provided that those scientific data and inventions are available to high-tech criminals, they may be misused for illegal purposes, which will push the criminal act to the verge of being uncontrollable. Another problem is about copyright issue. Announced freely to everyone, those intellectual properties can be easily copied and imitated as well as used for personal financial purposes, which disadvantages the researchers and owners of those inventions.
Briefly, even though knowledge in all fields should be shared and adapted widely, I believe that some information needs to be limited to the public for the sake of both givers and takers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the latest'.
Suggestion: from the latest
...essible to scientific advances, ranging from latest technological inventions to development...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'take the greatest'.
Suggestion: take the greatest
...ns to development in robotics, they can take greatest advantage of this progress to get on a ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o improve national intellectual level. On the other hand, there are some specia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, however, if, may, so, well, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47407407407 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10666348752 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4112701945 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244894846894 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910429493314 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777201971747 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157301427089 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851354277284 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.