Some people believe that it is important for children to attend extra classes outside school, while others believe that they should be allowed to play after school.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowdays, children attend more classes after school along with conventional classes and amusement such as playing games sometimes neglect. Actually, now it is a matter of recapitulation among general people. But what is the most effective method for dealing with this current argument. In this essay I will discuss both of this argument and draw a conclusion.
Firstly, in this era of competition the pressure of study among school students have frantically increased. People often have this opinion because conventional classes and guidelines are not sufficient for getting climax grade in examination in educational institutions. Subsequently, children have to attend sphere classes instead of getting permission by their parents for multiple playing activities after school. For example, in Dhaka most of the primary school children can not be able to acquire anticipated result unless attending extravagant classes and it is out of bound for them to think about playing after school rather than study In exorbitant tution classes. If children be fussy about their upcoming exams and results then they have to waive the leisure enjoyable physical activities at post school time.
One the other hand, paly and physical activities is an integral and inevitable part for younger age people. It is also possible to say because of notorious amount of studies they gradually deviate from their aspects of playing. For instance, a notable amount of children in Kolkata do not have any experience of playing outdoor games such as soccer, cricket etc. Because those children are stickler in their exam preparation and getting apex results in annual exam. As a result obesity, stress, mental illness are predominant among those children. Because they prevent their natural rights of playing activities and it leads to causes deleterious outcome for school going children.
In conclusion, although it is a common believe that extra classes are much more lucrative for the future and academic performance of children. I believe, it is a wrong point of view. Personally, I think authority have to make it mandatory to attend some indoor and outdoor play and play related activities after school and also in weekends altercation of extra classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34560906516 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76930981879 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5340659285 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338882619548 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962590209516 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715225399464 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204514342609 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626251287236 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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