It is often said that it has been essential to give a presents and gifts to acquaintance and household to demonstrate that we think about them.However the issue is not entirely straightforward and arguments can also be made against the idea.This essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.
One the one hand, those who support that giving gifts play a vital role in our life. These range from motivate to achievement of respect. For example gifts which we give can cause to address some problems , especially when they are overcoming the life obstacles. As a consequence , this can be contributing factor in the improvement of mood. Another argument is that giving present is great way to gain respect ,meaning that they find that we play fundamental role in their life and good role model too.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that not all people dwell in a circumstance where they tend to purchase a gift for their acquaintance. For instance people can bring their children to any kind of sport events such as football on their birthday party because football has already become well-known not only in Europe but also whole in the world . Moreover, historical place can bring the youngs closer together. This leads them, travel in the world is great way to people's longevity and maintaining the positive attitude rather than giving present.
To sum up,it seems advisable that the decision to give gifts based on financial circumstance . It would appear that it is more comfortable to provide presents compared to trip to other country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96577946768 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74052905769 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6994994237 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.833333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246474561092 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077728755769 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709782248742 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146495442461 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528042472337 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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