Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays it is very popular to say about healthy lifestyle. For the last several decades of years much attention is paid to this topic. We have access to all information that we need and possibilities to choose the way which is right for us. That’s why I consider that it isn’t the duty, it’s the right for every person keeping healthy and to consume nutritious food. Firstly, it’s very important to understand that nobody can force you to lead healthy lives. Second thing you should keep in mind, do not absorb on the expands of Internet the information about intaking healthy food, dietary supplements and so on, because who promote it they are interested in the earning money from you but not in your health.
As usual people start to take measures in the regarding of their well-being when the problems have already been obvious. Why they behave themselves in a such way, nobody knows. Probably it caused by their laziness, the lack of culture of their upbringing, insufficient financial resources. As example we can see that most of the people reach out the doctor in case of emergency when balanced nutrition and movement therapies can’t already restore their health.
Unfortunately the flip side of the promotion healthy life is making money fraudulently. There are many advertisements of biologically active additives which promise you to strengthen your physical state. Mostly some people believe and spend money but it doesn’t help to struggle with their overweight. Some services of delivery healthy food propose you to save time and money and to buy balanced nutritive servings. But unfortunately they already use products contained GMO and other harmful ingredients just in a beautiful package.
In conclusion, I would like to express my opinion concerning healthy life and diet that it is the vital part of everyone life. We should remember every time that our health is not timeless and it is better to take care about yourself since childhood in order in future not to treat diseases but just to maintain your general state of health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09329446064 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75894189971 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597667638484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6149185065 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.764705882 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165435140712 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452822017403 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467707117725 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969001873783 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264195353105 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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