Some people believe that men and women possess different skills. According to them certain jobs are more suitable for men than women. There are also some jobs where women perform better. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Apparently, in the modern world, women and men have equal opportunities to pursue their careers. However, it is supposed that each gender owns distinctive strengths. women are in possession of better skills in certain fields while the opposite is true for men in some cases. From my point of view, I generally agree with this opinion.
To begin with, women outperform men in a variety of professions. they seem to have inborn talents for jobs that require patience and meticulousness. that is why they are extremely qualified for careers such as nurses and teachers. Moreover, women folk are also proved to be more endurable physically and mentally; therefore, they are likely to hold position in terms of labour work.
On the contrary, men are superior to women in professions specializing in strong physique. Studies have shown that they are physically stronger; thus, can shoulder the responsibility of work that relates to heavy machinery and engineering. What is more, they are often more decisive, which helps them to be excellent leaders.
However, things have changed over time. women have demonstrated that they somehow manage to attain success in almost every aspects: science, politics, business, education, to name but a few. they have broken all the limits to show that they are capable of doing anything that men can. Take, Madam Curie, for example, was the first to win the Nobel Prize for physics.
In conclusion, obviously, each gender has their own strengths and weaknesses. Nonetheless, if they strive to overcome difficulties, a balance will eventually be gained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the contrary, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84525200718 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7905076821 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5882352941 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1764705882 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261528890559 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786365480909 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827631993593 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134544254057 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955399127213 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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