Some people believe that mobile phone is harmful while other says it is helpful. discuss both view and give your opinion.
In current era, majority of individuals have started using advanced technologies like cellular phone, laptop, and many more. A significantly larger number of public claim cell phone to be hazardous, whereas remaining group of thinkers consider it has advantageous. This essay will discuss both aspects with apt examples before a final conclusion.
To embark the demerits, smart phones are extremely addictive. Most of the work is being done by phone nowadays and people entertaining themselves by using various applications like instagram, facebook, whastapp and so on, which are actually detrimental not only for human body, but also for mental health. For example, recent survey discovers that all age group tend to send their time in front of cell phone's screen. Consequently, one is having addiction and individual would not be able to perform their suitable task appropriately. In short, it is somewhat dangerous for human beings.
Discussing the merits, latest phones have vary applications and facilities, which are indeed helping people not only for education, but also for entertainment. adolescents and adults are gaining knowledge in different field via youtube, and educational applications. For instance, one is learning language by researching on google translate, pocket thesaurus , and numberless are others. Overall, citizens are watching videos and listening music for rejuvenation, so they can accomplish new work with full energy.
I opine that every product has its pros and cons. Nevertheless, examining about phones, it is way more beneficial as it provides great profit in comparison with negative sides.
In conclusion, I reiterate that even though there are several dark side of cell phones, positive points are more as compared to negative one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f cell phones, positive points are more as compared to negative one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58455882353 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98843634496 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702205882353 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4339913808 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809065890588 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249339219586 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306326239463 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0373691001236 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326183496378 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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