Some people believe that movies should be based on social stigmas while others believe it should be based on real life heros.
Movies inspire us, challenges are assumptions, change our views, sometimes break our heart too, and left our soul and yes, teach us lesson. one of the most pressing concern regarding this topic asserts that, whether movies should be based on; social stigmas or real life heros? I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions, and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is group of people, who believe that, movies should be based on social stigmas. They strengthen their view point, by claiming that, social stigma is a procces by which the reaction of others spoil someone's normal identity. Moreover, some natives might be face criticism associated with their mental illness and physical disability in the school, college and society. They would annoyed and upset when someone makes unkind remarks on them, reason being, they are unable to intermingle with friends. Furthermore, some immigrants are victims of discrimination based on certain characteristics including: dark skin colour, gender identity, nationality, and religion. They are not allowed to share things, private washrooms, and even enter into the temples. A best epitome that, in the movie " The color purple", people face lots of discrimination in this movie. One dark colour women had to face troubles in their life and not allowed to go anywhere.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people, who believe that movies should be based on real life heros. They bloster their view point, by claiming that, youngsters are motivated from stars and get inspiration about hard work to achieve goal of life. Moreover, they convey massages, by which they become more innovative regarding their passion, and gain knowledge of dedication, discipline, and togetherness. A successful example that, the movie of "Bhaag Milkha Bhaag", Milkha Singh did lots of hard works to achieve his aspire , as this movie motivates people to do work hard to become successful in their life.
Nevertheless, weighing both opinions, I believe that, there is no single conclusion. Still, I take this ground that, an effective clap requires both use of hands. So, both kinds of movies play essential role ,and put great impact on people and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23901098901 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70264495179 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598901098901 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.055510241 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.944444444 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309521075742 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959795709882 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136642211196 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169351542526 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616987968965 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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