some people believe that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
In recent years, the purpose of museums has been receiving a great deal of public attention as some advocate for they should be an amusement place, while others are in favor of the idea museums should educate people. Both pros and cons will be analyzed in this essay.
On the one hand, there are several compelling reasons why museums should be enjoyable. First, since museums are regarded as one of the tourist attractions, their main aim is to entertain people. In fact, a myriad of museums exhibit a collection of interesting objects, videos to deduce visitors to visit, which will help them boost their revenues. Second, if museums are served as a place to educate people, they are inclined to become a monotonous place. This means that tourists are likely to get bored when they have to listen or read a lot of educational contents, such as history documentaries thus discouraging visitors from paying a second visit to these places.
On the other hand, under no circumstance should the educational purpose be marginalized. First, it is believed that the main aim of museums is to teach something for people beside educational institutions. As a matter of fact, the history behind displayed items should be explained by many professional staff in these places, which enables children to have a grasp of knowledge about many fields such as history, archaeology, science, culture and other aspects of life. Second, if museums lean totally towards the purpose of amusement, they will be no different from other theme parks or amusement centers. This means that the national history or cultural identity is prone to disappearing, thereby later generations are likely to know nothing about their ancestors.
In conclusion, both opinions seem reasonable to some extent. The purpose of museums should be both enjoyable and educational for mentioned benefits and drawbacks.
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- Writing task 1 11
- some people believe that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate people Discuss both views and give your opinions 78
- writing task 1 11
- Sport is becoming a business with high income for professionals and more companies have involved in financial and in other ways It is a positive or negative development 78
- Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15081967213 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79300389074 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9686993186 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36280701605 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123544332246 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875581978088 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229544894049 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530763406853 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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