With the progress of technology, there are various ways of getting updated with the latest news. More and more people prefer to use cutting-edge media to receive information, rather than reading newspapers. From my perspective, newspapers are the best way to learn about news and they have irreplaceable advantages.
Internet-based media are considered an effective way to access the latest news because of the following reasons. First and foremost, using social media such as Twitter and Facebook to gain information saves a lot of living space and facilitates environmentally sustainable development. This is because online news eliminates the need for disposing of the printed newspapers, which usually become an albatross around people’s neck. In addition, other media can give us personalized adjustment, such as font side, background color and light intensity, all of which are impossible for newspapers to do. Third, according to UN's data, over 30 percent of logs are used to make paper; therefore, news media that rely on renewable energy help solve the problem of deforestation. Nevertheless, the benefits mentioned above do not necessarily mean that we can underestimate the value of traditional newspapers.
In fact, obtaining news form newspapers can bring following benefits. As far as health is concerned, reading newspapers keeps us away from electronic radiation, a carcinogenic substance which compromises our health. Also, newspapers can protect our vision due to the diffuse reflection. Instead of releasing blue ray and reflecting light that reaches our eyes in a direct straight path, newspapers scatter the ray at many angles. According to the World Health Organization, people who are accustomed to reading newspapers are far less likely to get short-sighted than people who use other media.
Second, efficiency is another advantage of receiving information from newspapers, and this is because newspapers have fewer distractions, especially push notifications, which make people focus on irrelevant things and waste time. According to the Harvard University data, the reading speed of people who read newspapers is 30 percent faster than those who use other media. What’s more, the reading quality has improved dramatically because the physical presence of newspapers can improve people’s memory.
To recapitulate, people hold different perspectives on how to keep abreast of up-to-date information. Some people assert that other media is the key pathway to news, but still, I maintain that newspapers are a more effective way to gather information, as their beneficial effects outweigh the rest.
- The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous governments' expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every way Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop 95
- The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles. 56
- All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same numbers of vacations in a year To what extent do you agree or disagree 100
- Social media has replaced the traditional methods of communication and people use more and more social media to communicate and to follow news and events Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 95
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, third, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59398496241 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15417093568 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.135918661 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.473684211 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271384770643 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831834260546 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736689733985 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167992301582 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600202778765 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.