Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent decades, it is argued that there are increasingly numerous options for people to select in different fields. In my opinion, I firmly believe that a wide range of choices has been offering a lot of alternatives and benefited people all around the world.
First of all, it is obvious that the achievements in production progress have created a variety of products. This is because humans have invented a large number of different ways to manufacture and also varied the kinds of productions. Another reason for this improvement is the advance in education which has encouraged students and colleges to study and work in diverse majors and motivated them to think outside the box. As a result, the more knowledge people get, the more progressive products they create. For example, choosing suitable food has not been a problem these days since various sorts of food such as organic food, dairy foods, etcetera. Consequently, almost all people can consume relevant beverages without being scared of lacking nutritional value or allergy.
Secondly, the development of technology, especially the Internet, has offered unlimited options of ways to contact and transfer. The reason for this is the appearance of varied social media formats like Facebook or Skype has brought about considerable changes of corresponding between people, especially for whom live far away from family and relatives. For instance, instead of making a paid call to contact a distant relative, people now can keep in touch with others from time to time without paying any fees. Moreover, globalization has given humans many chances to study, work and do shopping. With a mobile device connecting to the Internet, students can select any online courses from plentiful schools and universities around the world or even purchase a foreign product with a click.
In conclusion, with the evolvement of manufacturing methods and the evolution of advanced technology, humans now have numberless options to select for almost all demands of life which have made almost everything more convenient and time-saving than ever before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s. This is because humans have invented a large number of different ways to manufacture and also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29552238806 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8381231817 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605970149254 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2923908521 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133168261154 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433595423368 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271408382931 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795951937613 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122784515022 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.