Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by mytran234 on Sat, 04/13/2019 - 02:36

Many people think that the more development of society is, the more options customers have. From my perspective, I totally agree with this viewpoint for two following reasons.

Apparently, the advancement of technology has played an important role in our modern life, which helps us easily access to cutting-edge information. If it had not been the internet, we could have never extended our range to have a broad view of market and know what suppliers and manufacturers for products we tend to buy. Customers become more sensitive about the latest shopping tendencies and regularly surf the internet for searching price and quality of products before making any purchase decision. In addition to this, internet marketing and public advertisement such as billboards on streets have been very ubiquitous for potential customers. It not only trigger shopping needs but also assists end users to choose better products and become smarter buyers than ever.

On the other hand, it is needless to say that business is experiencing the toughest competition period with a significantly increasing number of private enterprises in various industries. As an announced statistic in 2018, there was a higher percentage of small to average scale companies than before. People can conveniently buy things what they want in their neighborhood, which is synonymous with more promotion campaigns to defeat rivals. In trading battles, customers usually take the best advantages; therefore, they have the numberless choices to get a deal at more reasonable price.

In conclusion, although trading are facing the intense competition stage, I must admit that it also provides customers more options in many fields.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 724, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ds but also assists end users to choose better products and become smarter buyers than...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95149828301 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683018867925 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3593641871 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115972744544 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392247236742 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469791352537 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068584086045 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314696184965 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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