some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend doyou agrre or disagree with this statement.
Today, it is said that people have more options than we got in the past so that they can select the best thing for them. However, personally, I just partly agree with this statement.
To begin with, the evolution of technology has opened a lot of opportunities and choices for human. Take the education as an example, nowadays, we can opt for either attending the traditional classes or studying through the internet. Whereas, in the past, schools were too luxurious and limited so some people could not receive such a good education. Also, the creative methods have made the food market more diverse. Now, buying seasonal fruits is not a big deal for us. Furthermore, with the rapid developement of entertainment industry, human's mental life has been more and more increasing. When I was young, my TV just had 2 channels but for few recent years, there have been various choices of movies and TV channels for me to compare and enjoy.
On another hand, the unequal distribution of advanced technology and economy developement in many countries leads to the fact that there are milions of people lacking in basic necessities. Those people suffer famine, drought, and other disasters without any health or food supply. We have a bunch of options but there are not many available choices for them. Moreover, education and some certain jobs are still limited or only offered in big cities of many developing countries results in a large number of consequences for society.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, we get abundant selections in this age, nevertheless, there is still unequability of those choices. I hope that in the near future, everyone will able to approach the same benefits and chances to improve and enjoy their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... there are milions of people lacking in basic necessities. Those people suffer famine, drought, a...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hoices for them. Moreover, education and some certain jobs are still limited or o...
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Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...of many developing countries results in a large number of consequences for society. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52249134948 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75179414573 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7611489338 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196764795657 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622485160838 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046281946371 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11836006375 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355322240084 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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